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(原创)念奴娇·中秋夜感怀

2013-09-20 22:45:18| 分类：词歌类 | 标签： |举报 |字号大中小订阅

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念奴娇·中秋夜感怀

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祥云喜得,步凌霄,一路银河普照。隐隐琼楼斜影叠,袅袅柔飘祥兆。满目金波,魂随炫浪,恰到蓬莱岛。红衣醒睿,仰星空默然笑。

街夜闲步兴高,灯花随影,不见金轮皓。只是东风转西径,染尽川红装俏。岁月经年,独余悲处,霜鬓暗换早。可堪回首,惟托枫叶凭吊。

(词林正韵第八部仄声韵)

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(平)仄(平)仄平平(句)(平)平平仄(句)(仄)仄平平仄(韵)(仄)仄(平)平平仄仄(句)(仄)仄(平)平平仄(韵)(仄)仄平平(句)(平)平(仄)仄(句)(仄)仄平平仄(韵)(平)平(平)仄(句)(平)平平仄平仄(韵)

<<念奴娇>>双调共一百字,前后阕各十句四仄韵。

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